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Adrenaline by =Emmie-Lynne:iconEmmie-Lynne:



My heart pounds to the beat of the pedaling on the street as I steer back to my dorm late-at-night.
I hear a sound turn my head, turn back twice, frown instead, worried someone is tracking-me-down.
Breathing heavy, cold symptoms rise, my throat closes off, not surprised, allergies are going to bring me to-the-ground.
Lights go off on my path, freaking out, psychopaths, bordering the bridge to throw-me-over.
100 lb backpack weighed, easily brought to lay, next to me as my bike slips on-thin-ice.
Adrenaline, like no other, worse than any roller coaster, could easily give me a heart a-ttack.
Caffeine, roaring through, a double pod for one cup of brew, pulsing through me, as-quick-as thunder.
I laugh si-lently, at my clumsy-stupidity, biking through the stadium lot at-mid-night.
Lack of sight around the curve, gives me a startle and a swerve, jumpy as I am crossing-the-roads.
Fifteen minutes, top that ten, I am back, home again, slow-ly, sanity takes-over.
Jitters fill me through and through, yittery-yappery, questions flew, directed to my friends that come-over.
Now as my roommate sleeps, I turn, keeping in peeps, silence filling-the-room around my tap-typing.
Night comes to those with classes, homework and tests, a pain in our asses, as we study, reading, sleeping, dreaming.
Come again, tomorrow’s new, all over again, we won’t refuse, passing is our only-survival-method.
Changing majors? Quite unclear… sorry I don’t know my dear, a thoughtful decision a-waits, but-not-tomorrow.
I wish, this poem could end, I am getting tired my friend, reading for class still on-the-agenda.
Night to all, I am safe, 40 degrees tomorrow’s late, nature will take its course on-us-all.
©2008-2009 =Emmie-Lynne
:iconemmie-lynne:

Author's Comments

No, I didn't fall this time, my bike just slipped a little, and no, I am not that paranoid, otherwise I wouldn't be taking that path back... um, my heart was beating the biscuit, the rest was true, lol.

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:iconlifesizefairy:
I like the "-" and "," working together to pace this... makes the reader stop to really read what's being written (or at least that's what it did with me). Great job!

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:iconelisama:
Wow. *highfives for awesome poem and then hugs for that darned adrenaline*
<3

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:iconemmie-lynne:
thanks, I am glad you noticed... it was definitely intentional, I had to make it flow with the rhythm it was meant to have... thanks for the fave!

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:iconemmie-lynne:
lol... :D I also hate when my heart or stomach flutters, thats just as bad ;) Thanks for the fave!

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:excited::excited::excited:
wonderful tribute for those on sugar high

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:iconemmie-lynne:
lol.... thanks! :D

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:iconelisama:
I know!! It's such an awful feeling... it gets you out of bed in a flash, I tell ya. XD
And you're more than welcome. :D

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:iconemmie-lynne:
you get the butterflies in bed? are you talking about a sick feeling? eek, I didn't mean that kind, lol

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when i hear news that gives me butterflies and i happen to be in bed at the time, yes. not to mention dreams sometimes do that to me too, ya know?
...XD I know you didn't mean that kind...

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